Hi my name is Jedi I am in owairaka school primary School. I really like your story about Sign of a warrior. If you would like to See my learning it is http://odsjedidiahl.blogspot.co.nz .
Kia Ora, Hi, my name is Annalisse from Owairaka District School and I am a year 6. I really like your post about The Sign Of A Warrior. I also liked how you retold the story and put it into your own words. What I think you should work on is just when your are giving a description, so just like giving more of how long it took you and what did you have to agree with when you were making it. I would like for you to come and visit my blog at: Odsannalissep.blog.spot.co.nz Blog ya later Annalisse
Hi my name is Jodie and I really liked your story and also your characters. You had great ideas for your story.Next time you should make it more longer so people would know how good you are at writing storys.If you would like to look at my learning http://odsjodieb.blogspot.co.nz/ Blog ya Later Jodie.
Hi my name is Romena and I am in Room 19 at Owairaka Primary School. I really like your story about Sign of a warrior. It made me think of writing one. If you would like to see my learning blog it is http://odsromenai.blogspot.co.nz/
Hi my name is Lupe and I am from Hay park school. I love the way how you gave me a specific information about the sign of the warrior. It made me think that it is a real story, if you would like to see my blog here's the link to it here http://hpslupek.blogspot.com/
Hi my name is Petulisa, I am from Hay Park School. I like the way you describe the characters emotion and how they look like. My brother's favorite animal is a lion. If you like you can visit my blog. hpspetulisat.blogspot.co.nz
Hi my name is Jedi I am in owairaka school primary School. I really like your story about Sign of a warrior. If you would like to
ReplyDeleteSee my learning it is http://odsjedidiahl.blogspot.co.nz .
Kia Ora,
ReplyDeleteHi, my name is Annalisse from Owairaka District School and I am a year 6. I really like your post about The Sign Of A Warrior. I also liked how you retold the story and put it into your own words. What I think you should work on is just when your are giving a description, so just like giving more of how long it took you and what did you have to agree with when you were making it.
I would like for you to come and visit my blog at:
Odsannalissep.blog.spot.co.nz
Blog ya later
Annalisse
Hi my name is Jodie and I really liked your story and also your characters. You had great ideas for your story.Next time you should make it more longer so people would know how good you are at writing storys.If you would like to look at my learning http://odsjodieb.blogspot.co.nz/
ReplyDeleteBlog ya Later
Jodie.
Hi my name is Romena and I am in Room 19 at Owairaka Primary School. I really like your story about Sign of a warrior. It made me think of writing one. If you would like to see my learning blog it is http://odsromenai.blogspot.co.nz/
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Lupe and I am from Hay park school. I love the way how you gave me a specific information about the sign of the warrior. It made me think that it is a real story, if you would like to see my blog here's the link to it here http://hpslupek.blogspot.com/
ReplyDeleteHi Paihia School,
ReplyDeleteWOW! This blog post is really good I like how you posted a text that you guys love. And I also like Lions to there one of my favourite animals.
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Hi my name is rewa
ReplyDeleteyour writing was very descriptive and it is a very good piece of work
Kia ora my name is riley your writing was great. please check out my blog Rileys blog
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Petulisa,
ReplyDeleteI am from Hay Park School. I like the way you describe the characters emotion and how they look like. My brother's favorite animal is a lion. If you like you can visit my blog. hpspetulisat.blogspot.co.nz
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