Wednesday 30 March 2016
2016 finally!
We have become a part of the Manaiakalani Outreach Blogging group which means we are paired up with other classes in our cluster to share our blogs. This week we have been learning how to write interesting comments on blog posts. After reading lots of blog comments we came up with a list of success criteria that we think would make a good comment. We have practiced commenting on our own blog!
Our success criteria for making good blog comments.
Be polite - introduce yourself.
Say something positive.
Talk about something specific - like “your shading is effective”.
Make sure it makes sense.
Use correct spelling, punctuation and grammar.
To encourage a response you could......
Ask questions. - who, what, when, where, why, how?
Mention common interests or experiences.
Share/ suggest a link or site.
Give advice. "Have you tried?".
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Hi Zac
ReplyDeleteYour slide is magnificent. The colours make the writing stand out. The pictures on the slide match your sporty words that introduces you. Well done. Here is a link to our class blog: http://paihiaschoolroom7.blogspot.co.nz/
Wynter-Rose
Hi Zoe,
ReplyDeleteIt’s Mia. I really like your work. It tells me a lot about you. I also like mice they are like cute little fluff balls with feet. Did you know that mice generally like to eat grains and not cheese. Sometimes they eat peanut butter!
Hi Mia, I really like what you said about about yourself because you described yourself well “I have blue eyes and short golden curly hair.” How old is your guinea pig Chocolate? What are some interesting facts about tigers?
ReplyDeleteI love your slide about you, from Zoe. ;)
Hi Mia,
ReplyDeleteGreat presentation you have created. It is well set out and you describe lots of stuff about yourself. It gives away lots of your interests. Maybe you could shorten it down and not have so many words, but it’s awesome I was wondering how do you get your name in a keep calm poster?
Ezra
Hi it’s Zac. Mia I really like your slide you spaced out you're work really well. I like your writing you described yourself really well. Bye Zac.
ReplyDeleteHi Mia
ReplyDeleteWell done
I love the tiger picture and the picture with the bunny in it. You have put a lot of interesting facts. How did you get the keep calm my name is Mia?
from sarah
Hi Zoe
ReplyDeleteI really like how you explained yourself you sound really nice and I love your blog.
Thanks. You sound nice to.
DeleteThanks, from, Zoe. :) :)
hi im quinn and I think your blog is cool. You should check out my blog http://paroagreyquinnl.blogspot.co.nz/
ReplyDeleteThanks,
Quinn
Hi Room 7
ReplyDeleteI loved you blog it looked really cool
Caitlan at Paroa school
hi, I'm kaley from paroa school I really like how you made a slide that describes everyone in your class.I wish we were allowed to that.
ReplyDeleteHi there,
ReplyDeleteI loved watching your slide and I like your blog, here my my blog name check it out
http://myama7.blogspot.co.nz
Hi Ezra
ReplyDeleteI like rugby to and most sports and who is that guy next to you? By the my name is Riley and I go to Paroa school
If you want here is a link to my blog http://rileyf7.blogspot.co.nz/
hope you enjoy :)
Hi there,
ReplyDeleteI loved watching your slide and I like your blog, here my my blog name check it out
http://myama7.blogspot.co.nz
Hello, my name is Sam from Paroa school in Room 7, I think all these blog posts are cool and you guys are doing a good job :)
ReplyDeleteCheck out my blog at http://samj7.blogspot.co.nz/
Cheers, Sam ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
hi its Jaime from Paroa school
ReplyDeleteI really liked your slide I like how it described you and said lots of your interests here is a link to my blog http://jaimec7.blogspot.co.nz/
Hi my name is Ollie from Paroa School. I really like your new slide, I hope you can comment on my blog. http://ollier7.blogspot.co.nz/
ReplyDeleteYour blogs are all fantastic. What a great way to learn about all the students in Room 7. Keep up the good work :)
ReplyDeleteWow this looks great it really is so cool to read about you guys! I can't wait to read more!
ReplyDeleteHi its Jaime from paroa school
ReplyDeleteI really like your slide I like how it says lots of stuff about you check out my blog
http://jaimec7.blogspot.co.nz/
Kia ora Room7 it’s nice to see that you are letting people know a little bit of information about yourself.I think they were all really cool Jasmine’s one really stood out.
ReplyDeleteTalofa lava sarah,
ReplyDeleteI am Lorna from Hay Park School I really like how you have shared what is precious to you and what you love.Keep up the good work and most of all keep blogging!Since you said that you liked art I wanted to know if you like bright and dark colours? I have a friend called Jasman just like you and I also used to have bunnies too wow we have a lot in common.
From;Lorna
Kia ora Room 7. I think is great that you are working with other students in our Manaiakalani Outreach group. Your blog commenting success criteria is very good. Your presentation about yourselves is colourful. Just a tip - use a background and font colour that is easy to read. I look forward to seeing more posts on your blog.
ReplyDeleteI like your work Sarah you spent a lot of time on it and it looks great, because you have cute bunnies, and I liked the colors that you used and how did you get your name so glittery???
ReplyDeleteThat was really interesting what you guys like.
ReplyDeleteHow many people are in your class.
Please check out my blog at
http://lakebrunnerjayminc.blogspot.co.nz/
Hi Paihia School i'm just saying the values you have made are madly
ReplyDeleteincredible I have never seen anything like this before.
Hi room 7 I go to kawakawa primary and I like your values and hope you put more work on your blog and you should check out my blog http://kpsjamesb.blogspot.co.nz/
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Pahia school My name is Kura from Tautoro School, Well done
ReplyDeleteI love the tiger picture and the picture with the bunny in it. You have put a lot of interesting facts.
From Kura.
Hi Paihia School, I am Letisha from Tautoro School. I really enjoyed reading your slides about blog comments. I think that it is really important to know how and what to comment on. I really tautoko what you have said because people that aren't as kind use words that ain't even ment to be said. I think that you have now made everyone and everybody that doesn't know how to comment properly think first and then comment on what they really loved. To improve I think that you need a different type of colour for example if you had a red background and then you had orange writing all you have to do is change the colour of you writing or highlight the writing. But apart from that I really love this presentation yay!!
ReplyDeleteYour Sincerly, Letisha yr 7 Tautoro School. :)
Hi my name is Rueben from Paparoa Range School. I like your art, video’s and slides with the special effect’s. I didn’t know there was any type of gymnastics in the Olympics. You need to write more facts.
ReplyDeleteHi I'm Zoe I'm from Waikowhai Primary School I really liked the trampoline gymnastics video that you made. I thought it was really cool. Next time can you film yourselves doing trampoline gymnastics? It made me think of when I do gymnastics sometimes with our gymnastics teacher.
ReplyDeleteBlog you later